Hey i can so relate to this.. i feel the same way u do.. ur a very good writer i have read a few of ur other poems. they r all rele good. i love this poem .its amazing.. keep writing..
stay strong and take care
angie

Wow..very powerful...i can relate...especially to this...

But very much alive
Living a perfect lie
Killing me softly and slowly
Hurting me so

i feel that way a lot...anywayz...i love your poem...5/5.

stay strong...
~*~lisa~*~