Deep.
i like the way you ended the last stanza with the opening one.
it really gave it an unique twist to your write.
xox Kat

Wow, a great poems, ur poems are so great and each of them has a sensetive voice in it, it is so great, the way u wrote them.

Wut an end.It's nice that your poems express different feelings not love alone.keep it up.

Love,
Wishes