That was deep really deep i loved it, keep it up....

Aww. this was extremely deep piece.
quite different to your others.
this really got in touch with me and i felt the emotion and deepth within it.
this was jsut amazing.
sad, touch,deep yet just amazing.
xox Kat

This is amazing.

Very Very good poem. I loved it

Wow, this is great
specialy the part
she lay on the cold hard ground
all she could do was weep
this was her final day in life
for the angel had cut too deep.

Omg omg that is so great man i know just how you fell..
seriously im just like that every singel day..
butta good job..

Awww so sad... I love the way you write so full of emotion! xoxo