I dunno, i liked it, but the rhyming seemed forced and it didnt flow quite well. but it was still good.
take care

EEK!!! ASK HER OUT! : P (Oh Jesus, I hope I understood the poem right ^_^). Did you go out together? OH MY GOD! EMAIL ME AND TELL ME EVERYTHINGGG. -hearrtttt-. Great poem dear, I think it was nice. Repetition was a little much this time, but still good. love!

Take care,
- -SJGxx

Hey ben
i liked it
nice work as usual
lol
catch
xxooxx
greta (gretski)