Comments : On the Surface

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Great poem. Alot of emotion in it. It could have been a little longer, But it's great the way it is. I loved the 2nd stanza. Keep it up! Take care and god bless. 5/5

    .x.TaLeEe.x.

  • 17 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Great poem! and i love it! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice poem very well writen many people have gone through this. keep it up 5.5