That was lovely, i really liked reading it, it made me smile, keep writing my friend for you have alot of talent and we'll continue to write such well penned poems, full of love and emotion.
xxxxx

Oh...My...Gosh...this poem is exactly how i feel about my boyfriend! you nailed it all on the head, great job with this poem! i especially like the third stanza, amazing poem, you truly captured the essence of the feeling of love! you rock!

Fantastic.
Wonderful Rhyme.
I love the expression here, David!
Fantastic once again!!

A2U

I love the honesty and the energy of this poem. It brings a smile to my face, please read some of my stuff I miss your comments.

always
ur
friend
lissa

Wow, that was amazing. I wish I could say I know how you feel...