This was an excellent poem with a good message! i love the bit about the tree, it really stands out! the only problems i found with this were ::

Yes, life is unfair, that have been said
^ in this line "have" should be "has"

and

If life was fair, what challenge will be left
What pleasure will we feel in our dreams
Since everything you want is what you get
What knowledge will we redeem
^ in this stanza, the tenses are wrong compared to the rest of the poem, so you should fix that..

all in all, excellent write! 5/5

I loved the whole concept and the who point that you brought across. It's an amazing write one of the best I've read in awhile. Keep writing and take care.

*> : PainOfOne [blaine]

Well, i learned something today! this poem is very......i dunno....true?

Very nice! I totally agree with the saying of this poem.