Wow...this is a really amazing poem... it's so deep and emotional...i loved it and can totally relate.

This is a really nice poem. I really like the ending. The rhymes were ok, but 'lies' and 'cry' was a bit off. But yeah, good job!

My dreams are fading,
They will never come true,
My heart is pounding,
Cause I'm thinking about you.
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I loved those lines. This poem was so good. It was a little short, But you got straight to the point. I loved it!! Keep it up! =) 5/5

`Taleee. xx.