Good poem. It had a good message to it, sad.

This is really good! i love the flow! keep up the good work and isnt it true!
ashley
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I think this poem is good...mayb it could be a BIT better if it rhymed more, but nevertheless a good effort! keep up the good work! YAH!

I thought it was awesome...keep up the good work :)

Wow; this poem is really amazing.

Who said poems have to rhyme..you did a good job with this one...keep it up ...pratice makes perfect....5/5 check out my latest poems "arabian sands" "gifts of Sorrow" "my tears"