Comments : Uncontrollable

  • 17 years ago

    by Colby

    Yeah awesome poem, I can feel it.

  • 17 years ago

    by uponfairywings

    Beautiful poem!

    xoxoxo Haley

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow! that was a really great poem... it was so well written it was like i could feel how you aere feeling in ever line... i hope that you keep writing... 5/5