Comments : Do you?

  • 17 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Great write Poonam... I very much enjoyed this piece. Your words are impressively drawn. Just one thing... You've spelt "the" wrong.

  • 17 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Hi Poonam a beautifully descriptive write, heartfelt with desperation and clouded by emotion...left me thinking - nice work :o)