Comments : Tipsy

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    This poem is kind of confusing as to what it means personally, but I liked it none the less. It seems kind of satiric, although I'm not sure how. Good Job.

  • 17 years ago

    by sibyllene

    Whoa, i'm not sure what this reminds me of, but it's definitely something... Sorry, i'm lame. i like the contrast of the "polite" language filled with unconventional... meanings? and all the other oxymoronic language- "descend up the stairs," etc. cool poem.