Gurl ur poems r off the chain and i kno how u feel bout u've been though everything and ur only 4teen well im 6teen and for a 4teen to kno so much than some people is jus amazing 4real, ur peoms r deeper than any of these other poems on this web but thats all i had to say. Queen Tanzy

I like your poem, its very cute, and it can relate to some people

Such beautiful sentiments, i loved it xxALLYxx

Very good. I usually prefer metaphorical deep stuff, but i must say this poem here is quite well written and sounds very good. A touching scene it describes too, i like that.

Wow, i really liked that. not every person has experienced that love, and yet you write it like it happens everyday. awesome work. 5/5

I rel8 2 this 1 a lot.... it almost made me cry...
good work
5!!!!

Aww! i love it, so sweet. great work
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Aw. this is so cute :D