I think this poem is extremely good and I loved it!
xoxoxo Haley

Its very very good. I often see vent poems are the most deepest, have the most raw emotion while your reading it because you know what it feels like, and your feelings defintely shined through to the reader. It flowed magnificently... and I loved each and every stanza because each and every stanza had this meaning, simple, yet so profound to the human mind if your in that position. Excellent!