Very nice poem. The imagry was great. The movie is so sad I rekon. But you did a really good job with this poem. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee xx

I really enjoyed the poem, any my only criticism is that you repeated the word 'home' too often for me to be comfortable. I'd try to work around that, change a few 'home's to some other words, and restructure a few sentences to avoid being unintentionally repetitive.

Haha thats cool!:D i really liked this one, did yo get an A+ on it?! if not u were robbed. 5/5