Very good poem. the frustration is well writen. i like ur style:)

This is good, and the thoughts behind it are excellent...I think think a lot of them could prove to be a whole poem in themselves, it seems like it jumps around a lot

You should make a part two to this. Cause at the end you say 'It's just' in the second part you could explain that more. Awesome poem. ^_^ 5/5

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This is a really good poem. It shows your emotions good. Keep up the writing.

Hwey thanks for the feedback on my poems I read all of your song and I lived it I think you could go some where big in life with those song well good luck