Comments : Immortal Lover

  • 17 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Oh, baby, that was freakin' awesome, I love evanescence too, as you knew. and I can really relate to your poem.

    RLS

  • 17 years ago

    by Miss Pipp

    That is another really good poem, Evanescence is a great band too. the lyrics are really good inspiration and i can see where you're coming from.

    pip xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    I love Evanescence. And yes, I recognized some titles. Nice job, you can try adding more imagery

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This is an amazing poem...I love the title (that's why I read it). I really liked the first stanza, it's very original, and your message is clear.

    Good job! 5/5

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5.. W0W.. I am so amazed at how you write!

  • 17 years ago

    by amelia

    Excellent work
    5/5
    nicely writen
    yeah cud make out u had the evanescence inspiration :-)

    cud u vote & comment my poem murder or suicide
    i'll return the favour !

    love
    amy

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Excellently written. Evanescense is one of my favorites. :] Keep it up.

    Thanks, your in my favorites for sure too.