I need God? Thats news to me. Humm, I truly hate when people try to end their lives just because its tough. Its like they want everything to be easy. Well, thats too bad, because it isnt easy. I never got why people thought dying was a way out. Because you hurt others by doing so. Humm, good poem. Nice work..

-Jennifer.

Overall Rating: 4.4/5

I loved this poem, it opend up my eyes besides that keep up the good wrok 5/5 for me

Very nice poem n this is so true dont give up...really liked

God bless u

Wow what a deep and meaningful poem by you

i loved it
it was written very well and with your feelings

i see and know alot of people who hurt themselves over somethings some times not alot
its sad to know they have nowear to turn

i loved it
5/5

lana

VERY well written! I enjoyed it a lot! It made me smile. Thank you for making me smile!! :) Keep writing!!!!!

~~spanish367

I love the flow to this, excellent detial..vry godo writer...keep it up.

lissa

"There are other people, just like you,
who have their problems, yeah I do too,
you just have to take them, all in strife,
'cause there is a reason, to live this life,"

- So very true. I find it a real bother, having to deal with so many `individuals` who can't take anymore of what life has to offer them. I mean, life can be tough and perhaps terrifying- yet, why not try and look at the bright side it? It may not be sunflowers and blue skies all the way either- but eternal love does exist, whether it’s from a close one or God.

Like Jennifer said, "I never got why people thought dying was a way out. Because you hurt others by doing so." Relatively, where are they sending themselves? Did THAT ever occur to you?!

Anywho, it's a question of trying. Persevering. Knowing that you WILL survive.

For those who may be on the `brink`- read this poem carefully, and think. Just before you do anything that may change your life or anyone else’s for the worse- just think.

An excellent and inspiring piece, Jeff. The flow was constant with a beautiful message. Well done ;)

-Elysium.x

This one made me cry! How wonderful and i can almost bet that you touched alot of souls with this write. I have been in the darkest places. I saw the light and grabbed on. I am so glad I had the chance to read your beautiful words.