I really love the message of your poem, it's so beautiful, and I can totally relate to it.

Great job! 5/5

Keep writing.

Fantastalicious! lol, its awesome, really. Such great vocabularity and skill. {5/5}...My only critique is you should spell out 5, it pops from the page and causes a distraction from the fine writing.

[PygmyPuff]

This was a good poem. 4/5, but you try hard. So I give you 5

It was a little short, But it was good. I liked the meaning behind it. It was good. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee xx