Sorry, I don't know what Rubai form is. The beginning was complicated to grasp, because usually I am used to simple words that just say what they mean, but this is also good exercise to the mind.

//T.L.//

I like this poem, it speaks the truth, but i don't know who the person is? anyway another woderfully creative poem.

Wonderful. Nice flow and rhyme, another beautifully written poem. Keep up the awesome work.