Great poem. The details are what it is all about, and this poem had such great, vivid details that I felt like I could practically live it. Whew, that was good.

When I stumble of I fall

I think you meant "When I stumble or I fall"

Another good peice. I liked the way you expressed this one. It was also great! The 2nd stanza was my favourite. Reminded me of something in the past. Good job on this one hun. 5/5

`Taleee. xx.