Wow, so deep, you have touched a delicate subject without being abrupt
xox- Bev

Good write. Powerful words and i can tell you really cared about what had happend in it ((if its true)).

Thanks for the comment on my poem

Wow! amazing poem.. the emotions were so powerful, so strong! the flow was pretty good although it did have a couple of rough edges.. and your detailed descriptions were brilliant.. great imagery.. it brought a tear to my eye.. 5/5

Wow!!! Hunni That was absolutely brilliant, it made me cry tho..only because in a sense i know where your cominb from!! keep up the good work sweetie!! 5/5

I really like this one!

Very true to life, gave me chills.

joy*:.xx

"Your a monster"
[You're. Because you are initially trying to write, 'you are']
This poem was alright. There was a lot of emotion, and it seemed to control the entire poem. Anger and hate were all I felt. I had no other emotion, you should put some in, give more detail, make us feel the 'pain' everyone around felt. Still, overall a good poem.

Hate is the word I use for you.
Hate for the way you look at her
Hate for the way you hit her children
Hate for the way you hit her
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I liked that part. A very strong emotional poem. You've done an excellent job on it. I liked it alot. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Great deep spiritaul poem. I liked it. 5/5
Take Care

~DyingBlackRose~

Awesome poem..very deep...5/5
keep it up

~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~ aka Sarah

Aww sad but good ur a very good writer

Wow, Untold Truth. [ couldn`t find your first name]
This was amazing!! I`m like.. absolutely speechless here. I read it three times just to recapture the emotion and imagery you put into this poem. just, amazing. Keep it up 5/5
Much thanks for your comment on my poem.

Love ya,
Samantha Hollywood

That was very deep, keep it up
Love tanya xxx

Wow very nice poem keep up the good work!!!

Very well controlled, perhaps a bit repetative, but stiill nicely done. Keep it up

Again this is more of angered thoughts than a poem. Nothing special, nor nothing new to be bluntly honest.

Hey! this is really good!!! ur a great writer!
btw, thanks for ur comment!

I can see that poetry is how you deal with pain and anger, It was a very good poem. t/y for the comment on mine

Woooow! This BLEW ME OUT OF MY MIND!! Strong words, strong emtion, powerful play on words!!

Simply AMAZING!!
Great write, dear!
Keep it up!

5/5
xxLollixx

This poem is filled with anger, and I think you expressed that pretty well. The part I liked the most was the beginning I think you made a good use of repetition.

Good job!

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby