Wow!! that was very good 5/5... keep it up

Your poem is so true

Oh! what a nice poem! I liked this part the most:"the beauty that really matters
lies in our heart our soul our core
because wen u love Wat is inside
you love what is outside even more"
*5/5*
You're really good!
best wishes / Joyo

Omg im sorry if this is how u feel i felt like this after my bf dumped me not only was i in love with him but he is the first guy to ever dump me and he had a new gf an hour later and i felt i wasnt good enuf for him so i went bullemic and i was bullemic for 6 months im so sorry u had to know what that feel like if this is a true story ok well ill stop now cuz ive like written a story well if u will id appreciate it if u wud comment on my peoms thanx buh bye!!~rae

Omg im sorry if this is how u feel i felt like this after my bf dumped me not only was i in love with him but he is the first guy to ever dump me and he had a new gf an hour later and i felt i wasnt good enuf for him so i went bullemic and i was bullemic for 6 months im so sorry u had to know what that feel like if this is a true story ok well ill stop now cuz ive like written a story well if u will id appreciate it if u wud comment on my peoms thanx buh bye!!~rae

Hey this poem is awesome..it relates to a lot of girls..as well as me..thanks for the comment too.

Good poem. really great rhymes. keep it up!

5/5 wonderful every word was true keep up the writting!!!