JL ...
I love these 2 lines , they say so much with such few words :
Bleeding the pain
Through invisible wounds

A very creative piece that speaks volumes with it's vivid painted pictures of words.

The imagery created was ingenious for thispoem. Truly original with a clear message. I have often felt like I could be that lonely girl.
It was almost like I was reading a scene from a movie that is how lively your useof words were!!!!!!