Wow this is really good i like how u described the people who said if only if only and thx for the comments

I love how in such short stanzas you can show a window into so many situations in so many different lives. it's beautiful.

I completely love this poem. =) my favourite stanza:

"If Only, If Only
I cried onto the bed
I would recant everything
Everything I had said"

this one really stood out when i read it, filled with emotion and hinting at words unsaid.

congrats on a great poem 5/5
xxx