Did i talk to you last night? i dont know if that was you or somenoe else.

love,
Jaimie

I thought it was good, i always use that rhyme scheme. it would add to the flow if u attempt to keep similar lengths between couplets. but i liked the theme and it had good closure...much luv

Hmmm I dont think we met before Jaimie It might be someone else.

And yeah I should fix abit of the couplets.

Twisted and erie... deffinently different, but I liked it! ;)