Wow, very deep and emotional! I like it a lot! Keep up the good work! 5/5

-Stephanie-

I thought it was alright. You ended two sentences with 'know', so it ruined the little flow! haha love my rhymes :P
yeah, that's the only thing. Good job though.

Wow, short but powerful, it delivers the frustration and hurt so well that the reader is left wanting to know more. A fantastic write again 5/5

Great!!!
flowed well and altho it were short it were rlly powerful =D

well done

Love
Jacs
xxxx

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