I REALLY DID ENJOY THIS ONE! Mostly because I go through this all the time when I try to tell my boyfriend how much I love him and the words just wont come out!

This was really cute. good job 5/5

The poem was good. But maybe try and use a bit better grammer and spelling. Eg. cuz = Cause. =)

Very nice poem though. 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Lol.. this is only a little crappy.. tehee.. the emotions are clear although maybe you should add more descriptions and detail.. this one a little too simple.. it was just lacking a little.. you know what helps me sometimes? i exaggerate how i feel to make it more exciting.. you are still letting out your feelings and you are also producing a better poem.. good try though.. 3/5

This was a cute little poem-short-but cute