Its was very upfront, but maybe u could add to the poem and make wht u have into like the thoughts of a man in an asylum; or just add something detailing. i like it, and its a very emotionally grabbing piece, but maybe throw something else in.
anyways, much luv.

It was a good poem...you should add sum more to it tho...
Xox Laura marie aka Sweets

Omg, its so gooooood,lol

This is nice and short and to the point... however even though its short it still makes me sad because i have been through the this faze (razor faze), and its one of the worst things to go through... keep up the good poem writing... 5/5

Short but effective

This is soooo sad. cheer up. things get rough but the best thing to do is to keep moving forward