REALLY GOOD POEM!! I LIKED IT ALOT!! GUYS SUCK..DONT THEY AND THIER SO DANG CONFUSSING!! WELL GOOD POEM ANYWAY!! KEEP IT UP!!

Totally agree with forgottenLuv guys suck and they are totally confusing but your a good poet so keep it up cant wait to hear more from you. love yas soloangel

Nice job, great topic. One thing, you can still improve your flow.

Very well written. I can relate to it oh so well right now. Congradulations with the contest.