Cute poem. Remonds me of back in the day when I was overcome with lust for a certain boy and he wouldn't pay me much attention...Original poem and I loved some of your descriptive words.

Wonderful write Melissa... Your words are captivating. I love every word in this poem. Another amazing piece! How do you do it?! :)

As always, sweet, you haven't let me down with your use of this amazing language!! I love your poetry. It's so graphic, and appealing. Truly, another 5/5.. What is there left, for you to aspire to?? lol.. xx

"was that shyness on your teeth"

Where does a line like that even come from? I am in awe of that line alone. You have such a unique way of expressing the mundane or should I say a subject that many right about constantly.
Well done as always. Take care and keep it up~Holly

Adorable

Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
When you have the chance, could you rate my poem “If I”
Appreciated- Truly Spoken

EEEEK I love this !xxx

EEEEK I love this !xxx

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