Good! it could use a little more...but it was still good...

~*~Elisha~*~

Good poem! But you need a better ending to sum your poem. I will give it a 4/5, only because I don't care much for the way you ended it! Keep up the good work!

-Stephanie-

Sounds like good advice.....but all of this is true if you want to hide this habit follow all of this....i have used some of the same ideas with my own problems with cutting......well written....good wording