This was good... very cute... somewhat general though... try to use bigger words or more comparisons and symbols to create a more dramatic image... someone told me this for my poems, and they seemed to get better... it improved my writing... keep up the good work!

This was good... very cute... somewhat general though... try to use bigger words or more comparisons and symbols to create a more dramatic image... someone told me this for my poems, and they seemed to get better... it improved my writing... keep up the good work!

That's sweet. I liked this poem the most! I love it when you're with someone and they can make everything feel so good. You did a good job on this poem, Really well done. Keep up the great work!! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Wikkid poem Ma
keep it up
: ) ...

Been there. Very good. Have you ever seen the movie, Never-ending Story, which is for children, but boy, that is a movie full of things everyone should pay attention to. I was reading your profile and thought maybe, if you had not seen the original, you might like to:) Keep up the good work and remember, you can make it happen!