Nicely said.Great

Beautifully written with such passion.
Sorry I have no criticism to offer, just a standing ovation....Well done!
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Beautifully written, great work.
love sammi xxx

Hey bro.

I loved the idea of this, not too hippy like...I just thought that after the first stanza the flow seemed to degrade and become irractic in say that made me want to count up the syllables to see what was going on.

Maybe you could look at that...otherwise bold effort.

Great poem. the rhyme fits perfectly. the content is deep and emotional. great from beginning to end. few can write this way. it flows very very well. great job. keep writing!

This is pretty deep...
good job

This is good i like the different words that you use cause it mskes you think what they could mean if you dont know what they are

Interesting poem-My favorite part is
smile for the orb
and her lunar rebirth--
loosen your heartstrings,
fill them with mirth--

Your flow seems a little off in some places. But other than that, Nice job

That is really good...u can hear the rhythm as you read...it almost sings out to you. nice work!

A very well written poem. Really loved to read it!

This Poem Makes Me Happy... Ok That sounds really dorky.. but its true. its so seet and flowy and areally good poem..I like the metaphors.. -Sigh- it makes me just Happy.

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xLaurenx

This was awsome writting...excellent style of writting indeed

This is a good poem! good jobb!..

i was just wanting to say thankss.. and i was wondering if the lines on my other poem is better now? or should i still change itt? and it didn`t actually happen to me. so yeahh.