U hav an amazing knack for writing dark sad poems....that was grrt...i loved it...it seems as if no one cares...like life has no hope, u are all alone and stuck in a hell hole u cant dig urself out of....trust me i kno that feeling...i am experiencing that feeling....
love ya lots,
sore

This sounds ALOT like what he was telling me a few days ago...im saving him.
Lies and threats, pervade my every step and look
I'm withdrawn and fearful, each stranger is a crook
I can't trust anyone now, except perhaps Becky
and even her, she can't begin to actually truly see
^ is my fave stanza, and i love the entire thing in general!

I feel your pain and its good that you're sharing it. I am sry all this is happening to you. But you're right you have becky and you have God and all ur P&Q friends. THis was a vry deep poem one of ur top 5.

Lissa

It was truely sad. Some of it didn't fit together, as of some of the lines, especially with some of the forced rhyming. But overall, I thought it was great. Some of the expressions in there were magnificent, and it went really deep to show how some people think this way, how alot of people can relate! It was sorrowful. Stick in there. Even if you don't have control over some things in your life... you have control over where you are going, and it doesn't have to be there. 4/5!