Great poem!!! 5/5

xoxo
ashlie

Wonderful poem loved it your in my favorites

Nice one , , ;-) i like it

That was beautiful! I loved these lines:
"and since you've came into my life
Ive got nothing more to fear"

Very nice poem hun. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

You only rhymed some of the couplets, I think you should consider going back and rhyming the rest, it shouldn't require too much more effort.

Lovely touching poem, well done 5/5

Great poem- loved the last two lines!

"All these words are so true
and forever i want to be with you "

5/5

That was so lovely and wonderful...:)

Aww.. another very sweet poem.. the flow worked and so do most of your rhymes.. the descriptions could be made more detailed.. but i think that is just your style of writing : very simple.. nice job! 4/5

I love the way u write if you get time will you please check me out.