Aww that was soo cute and thx for commenting on mine and ya i really am just a lil f'd up u just cant tell cuz i can hid it really good =] if u have aim u can always im me on imalamawotwot =] much love to u

Actually, I liked it. It was different. Really well done! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Very sweet

You're right, it's not the greatest, but it is pure, sentimentally speaking.

I really liked it! You could tell it was from the heart and i liked the repetition 5/5

Nice write. I like the unique style and there's nothing wrong with it. It's just a form of freestyle poetry. Keep up the good work! 5/5

Awww.. that was so cuutee.. i thought it was good! short n sweet! nice work.. i can relate and i am sure many others can too! great job, ill give it a 5/5