Comments : The Sweet Sinful Dream

  • 17 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Great poem Jason! loved it 5/5
    XxXN-G-C-SXxX

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    That was really good, i enjoyed reading it, keep writing my friend
    xxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by christina marie

    Hmm. This gives off a mysterious dream-lover vibe. I like it.

    And I love this line: I can be your wreckless lover.

    It's drew my attention. =] Very nice piece. 5/5. Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by gabriela

    I loved it!well penned,and it has a different style.

  • 17 years ago

    by Simply Complex

    Wow that was really great! Nice style 5/5