I really love that.. its rele good soo far.. i like it. im not sure wut u should also put. all i kno is its amazing so far. ur a very talented person. keep on writing cuz ur great at it.. 5/5
angie

This poem is awesome!!!
did it take you long???....wow thats all i can say!!....its VERY GOOD!!!

I felt helpless, like I was standing in the shadows watching all you described and understanding how true your words ring. Very, very good!

It is just so true. very well written

Wow, i loved it, i believe in angels so the parts about the angels crying meant something to me. It was sweet and kinda sad in parts but i loved every bit of it
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I agree with everything everyone has already said, especially krissy...reading it i felt so helpless, i wanted to reach out and help you so much...i loved your poem so much because i guess in a way i could identify with it yet also see a different turn to how i was feeling, you're great with words...take care
luv jess

That was so amazing.....you touched my heart and made me think wow life is really that deep.... crazy to think sometimes life feels so bad and all you ever had felt like nothing.... great poem