That was really good 5/5 i could tell that that had a lot of meaning too u and i no just how that feels will good job and if u get a chance will u read and comment on my poem sitting on bed waiting to die? thx much

I like this one. 5/5 Keep writing. Check out mine to please.

Great poem. the rhyme fits perfectly. the content is deep and emotional. great from beginning to end. few can write this way. it flows very very well. great job. keep writing!