This is good im glade your the first one to read mine..Cuase i just started today..But your a good poet also..

tabby

Nice song - I would be glad to sing some day the songs of mine, too.

Greetz
David aka Insignia

I Thought It Was Really Good And Well Written, Totally Mad Job Dude!

Lol, agreed. Very good and well writen

Really coooooooooooooooooool
keep up the good poems
c ya later
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Hey bro nice one i would love to hear it sung to some music clearly you're a pretty good writter keep it up and dont let anyone tell u otherwise.