This poem is deep! I relly lyk it I guess cuz I can relate!! Keep ya head up ma cuz things will always get better u were put on earth 4 a reason!!
~Da 1 Nd Only~
Jade

I like ur use of rhyme! Well done, its like a story...I luv it! I give it 5/5, keep writing!

Hey
love the poem.
its soo good.
i wish i could write like that.
i like the meaning

I really like this poem. I used to cut myself and so I can definatly relate. It is a really emotional poem! Good job!!

-Kyleene

Hey great poem. i rate it a ten! keep ur head up cuz there is always someone out there who cares about you. trust me i learned that. i can relate to this poem. u are also very talented. keep writing.

lots of love
hayley

Wow1 tight i love it ur really tallented! well done 5/5! i read ur othea poems 2 and there also realy great! love steph

Great poem---each line is really strong. u have a lot of talent so keep rinting 5/5 hope things get better for u

Wow i luv this one thanx for commenting on my poem we kind of write about the same things so i luv reading yours
keep it up your a great writer 5/5
luv monique x x x

Wow i like this one to i know...well not know but one of my friend was a cutter so i know the stran for it... i helped her through that hard time in her life ... anyways i talk to much lol anyways i hope u r doin better here to talk if u wanna
take care
xoxo
robyn

Awww. My friend is a cutter, and she won't stop. I wish she would tell someone. Good job on the techinique.

God!!! i get this poem and those feelings u feel while writing it so much....its like written from my heart...full of closed up emotions..
xox Soley/anouk

Great one! Sad of coarse but i love it

Het great poem i can realate to it alot
def 5/5 mel

Wow its so good i can totally relate ! its so good altho 4 soem critisisim u should try 2 stick 2 1 pattern otehr than that its so awsome keep up the great work ~m~

Omg hun this one was amazing and this is comming from an girl who was once a cutter. that one lsat cut for me almost costed me my life but my bf walked in and found me. that was the dAY I REalized that he loved me that he was scared at first to show that he loved me.but yea anyways keep writin girl cause damn this shits good id read any of ur pieces any day.

Duuude I really like that. Great job. You can picture everything

This is very sad, i hope you don't still do that, I use to cut myself too, until I started to realize, it helps in no way, just leaves scars that will always be there to remind you of your pain

I really liked this poem, and i can relate to it too.
Stay strong, don't let idiots win.

Ur poor thing. i love ur writting. i can so relate to it as well. keep up the good work.
love willow xxoo

One word...Amazing. I almost began to cry while reading this one. you have great talent as well. This poem seems like it kind of explains my life in a way. Great job. 5!