Im not sure I can understand the theme of this, its a tad "out there" but its very good. {5/5}

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Change is good at times. Sometimes we have to accept it. Being stubborn won't change it back. But yeah, life is about changes. Good poem.

Thats a real good poem it almost seems like a song!!! :D keep up the good work!!

Great poem.
has all ur feelings in it, keep writing!!!

Love
Jacs
xxxxx

I really liked your poem, it's so sincere. You said all you wanted to, and it's well written.

Good job! 5/5

I can etll u vented and poured out ur guts but it seems like more of a diray entry than a poem....it wasok, but i can tell u hav potential to do better...i dont kno wut this about rlly....keep writing..
love ya lots,
sore

It kinda seems like its about moving away because this is exactly how it was when i had to move away from everything i knew for practically all my life changes are good sometimes i'm really glad im moved because i met my bf and i love him to death yet it has its down sides like i miss my friends and my family. but anyways .. great poems seems like you got out what you needed to say.

A little vague towards the start but picked up well. A sad piece, really good work. 5/5 x

Aw, This was a little sad. But I really liked the last two stanza's. They were great. And this poem was great! Very good meaning to it. Awesome job!! 5/5

`Taleee xx

Lovely poem. Brillently done. As said before. Talented.

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Yeah, i liked this one and it was good, you have talent. I think your words are wonderful.
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Hey dis is a gr8 poem!i will relli miss u jessy! i kno its relli tuff 2 leave everythin so pergect n leave! bt chnges r a part of our lif! luve it!

Awwww how sad. i kno the feeling. very gr8 poem, so much emotion! 5/5

The repitition was pretty well done throughout the poem, but sometimes I felt like you may have taken it a line too far. In any case, good poem about the confusion of leaving, possibly after school ends... not sure about that part.