Heya thought i\'d return the favour, i like your poetry huni and i\'ts good to see that you have alot of nice stuff to inspire you! I thought tho that your keeping it very simple, maybe you should take the risk and add a bit more depth! There\'s nothing wrong with the way you write tho and i\'m not saying this to upset you or to be a Bi*Ch but i\'d like to see you and your poetry progress because you have alot of talent xx love always keri xx p.s thanx for readin my poetry xx