Comments : If Only

  • 17 years ago

    by David Moss

    Another good one - I would consider a title such as "Monday" - something short but not directly related to the content - but easily inferred. Then throw in the word "mundane" somewhere to lyrically tie it in, such as the 3rd repeat - In the same old way, mundane. JMHO, good writing - DM

  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Sometimes you have to make changes in your life to keep from getting bored with the same old routine.