Wow, i thought this was well written, and it flowed very well. It made sense and touched a part of me inside. Wonderful words.
Love Tara-Kay
Beautifully Poetic
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This is very good poem thanks 4 the comments on mine. i feel ya in this poem.

Hey hun... whos this one for then?

Good flow it really liked it it showed a lot of emotion

Great poem! i thought you expressed yourself good and the flow of it made it easy to read and tied everything together. great job! well written!

I thought(knew) you were to.
--i think it should be knew :]
Be in love with you, I fall.

I fall for you-- i liked the repitition

That night I learned a lesson,
I was meant to complete you
--like this because it shows when you love someone they teach you what or who you were emant to be, they show you what you have been missing

nice simple write