Comments : The Hand That Feeds

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Open my eyes, so I can breathe.
    Uncover the lies and all the deceit.
    The hand my eye came across,
    Was just in the reflection of me...
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    Loved that part. Was so good. The poem was really good aswell. Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee xx