I really like this poem.

I wanted to write one about taking pills.

But I really really like it.

Kim xox

Very sad poem. I liked how you went through each pill. Really good job, Though I hope it's not true..

Keep up the great work, And smile. 5/5

`Taleee xx

Hey hun! brill poem...like the way u went through each pill!

xxx tc xxx

Hmm, its a good poem ! very good, but i hope its not how you truely feel, otherwise, id be like! arhhh what did i do!, i love you alice! dont forget it!!
xxxx love and peace tom

Very good, babe.. Check your spelling mistakes, and edit them.. Other than that, this is very honest. Well done, sweetie, for an incredible poem, of true pain and anguish. 5/5, absolutely. xx

Wow, that was very powerful,
keep up the great work
love always fallen_angel aka jessie xoxo

I Love This , i feel i can relate to it actuly , xxxxxx

Wow alice that was great so are all of your other poems.
and yea ive seen when a stranger calls
but i just made up my poem didnt copy the movie

xoxox
brittney

Brilliant poem, i can relate to this. Like to way you went through each pill. Keep up the good work.

5/5
i really like this poem too.

Very Good!!!!!!

This poem really got to me, because i can relate to it well...Amazing piece tho. 5/5

Alice! Yet another awesome poem! Love it love it love it! It makes me very sad and moved me alot! I'm adding you to my favourites

~Bronte~