Alright while this wasnt eaxctly one of your better poems, it was pretty alright. I think you could have explained a bit more. I really think faith should be a parachute but that's just me as different religions have their own faith even though just having faith could be universal. Also I don't think having it as evryone else and thrashed is really all that well. Even though you say not to get offended there might be people who are. Just maybe try going into more detail about whatyou are trying to say.

Umm, i dunno. I thought it was okay, and it flowed well, but i agree with Kaylee. Maybe you needed some more deeper detail about what you were saying.
love Tara-Kay
Beautifully poetic

This was pretty good.. you obviously put a lot of thought into it.. this flowed well and the descriptions were good..

We always have are chutes
^ here, i think you meant "our" not "are" but maybe i am mistaken

good write! enjoyed reading it.. 4/5