Chels... This is another sad write. The emotion and sorrow cries out in this one.

I just wish someone would show up at my door
Tell me that I don’t have to cry anymore
Tell me to throw away my paper and pen
I’ll never have to release my feelings in poetry again

^^ Although I understand what you mean, and I do hope someone does turn up at your door and say these wonderful things.... please promise you won't stop writing?! (",)

How I relate to this piece so well, Great poem and wondeful message behind it, the repetition served it well. and that inner strugle you protrayed it well. well done on this poem and listen kiddo, I'll tell you this straight up, know one thing and one thing is true. you stop writing and you'll have a lot of fans knowking on that door demanding you to get your ass back in writing gear. I'm not joking, sometimes we are blinded by our sorrows we do not see the love around us. and kiddo you're loved so much.

so that person on your door is already there, and they're not one but many, only waiting for you to open that door and they'll take you away.

Cheal, what a beautiful emotions penned, if i were at your door, i will tell you, don't throw them, coz you're the gift from above and please don't stop writing. anyway, keep your smiling whatever, take care, bert.

Hush little baby, silent your cries
Why do I see sadness in your green eyes?
Would you like me to hold you in my arms?
While your world is crashing down, I’ll keep you from harm
^^^
OMG Chels I feel the sadness ripping through my heart as I read this . What's wrong baby girl ?
You know I hold you in my arms and heart forever . You are never alone cupcake, cause momma will always be here to listen and comfort you throughout the bad times always. Just call Mawwwwww AND I'll be there.

Love ya A.I.D XXXXXXX

Loved it!

My favorite stanza was:
Stuck here again to cry on my own
Family isn’t important anymore in this home
Everyone is drifting farther and farther apart
While no one sees it’s breaking the youngest heart
I felt likea tear was goina escape...
Sometimes thru change we forget that love and support must always remian.
Awesome Write!

Another wonderful poem Chelsey. This one was very deep and I loved it, it made me so sad, I know how you feel when family isn't family anymore.

"I just wish someone would show up at my door
Tell me that I don’t have to cry anymore
Tell me to throw away my paper and pen
I’ll never have to release my feelings in poetry again"

^^I feel the same as you. Sometimes I just wish I didn't have to feel so hurt and write so much. But it makes you unique, you're a very talented writer, don't let go of that. Once again, wonderful job on this poem.

I love this, the elaborate emotion you used, the sorrow realization. You did a beautiful job, surely brought a tear to my eye. :( , well done 5/5 xoxchristina

I also love the emotion in this poem it brought me to tears you are a really great at wrighting lovely poems that people can relate back too
well done

5/5 if i could 100/100

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lana

Hey chels i luv the way uve written this. it was sad and beautiful at the same time. uve written it s0o well. it was s0o t0uching with l0ts 0f em0ti0n. very well written. xx
l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Excellent poem

Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
When you have the chance, could you rate my poem “If I”
Appreciated- Truly Spoken

Good poem but you couldve said it better